Hai guys, aku mau berbagi soal writing ielts, biar aku ga lupa dan kita sama sama belajar.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development. 

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.

India is the highest in agriculture, Japan is service-centred, Brazil is also service-based, although the percentage of the services is still lower than Japan's.

Possible trends

India = agriculture-based.

Brazil = service-based (largest share in services, but not the global leader).

Japan = service-based with the strongest industry.

Options for intro sentences:

The bar chart illustrates the distribution of workers across three sectors in three countries at different stages of development.

The bar chart illustrates the proportions of people employed across three sectors - agriculture, industry, and services - in India, Brazil, and Japan, which represent different levels of economic growth.

The bar chart compares the proportion of workers in the sectors of agriculture, industry, and service, representing distinct levels of economic growth in Japan, Brazil, and India.

The bar chart provides a comparison of employment distribution among agriculture, industry, and services in India, Brazil, and Japan, reflecting their differing levels of economic development.

Overview

Overall, India’s employment is dominated by agriculture, Brazil has a service-based structure, and Japan is led by services but also records the highest share of industrial workers.

Body Paragraph 1

In India, more than 60% of workers are employed in agriculture, which is far higher than the proportion in industry, at around 12%, and in services, at roughly 30%. In comparison, Brazil’s workforce is more evenly distributed, with agriculture accounting for about a quarter of jobs, industry representing just under 30% , and services making up the largest share at approximately 50%.

Body Paragraph 2

Meanwhile in Japan, services employ about 65% of the workforce, which makes this sector the largest by a wide margin. Industry is also significant, with around 35% of people working in this field. By contrast, farming involves fewer than 10% of workers, giving Japan's agriculture the smallest share among the three sectors and of the involved countries as well.